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20190423230301bullying_in_schools

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Bullying in Schools

Topic: How to prevent bullying in schools

Thesis Statement: investing in cheap and manageable anti-bullying campaigns, because of the availability of resources such as teachers’ expertise, presents an opportunity for effective implementation of anti-bullying campaigns in schools.

Bullying has long been a subject of contention, with different stakeholders, including researchers, psychologists, and the school fraternity delving into different approaches to addressing the challenge.

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